AEO · Original finding

Removing pronoun-led sentence openings lifted LLM citation probability on our test set by a measurable margin.

We rewrote 14 high-traffic agency pages to replace 'It usually takes…' style openings with explicit subjects ('Local SEO results usually appear…'). Citation rate across a 30-query basket on ChatGPT and Perplexity rose by roughly 18 percentage points over six weeks.

Methodology

Manual edit pass on 14 URLs; pre/post citation probe on a fixed 30-query basket across two LLMs.

Limits of this finding

Single agency sample (n=14 URLs). Effect size will vary by domain authority and topic.

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